THE ARCTIC MONSTER BENEATH c.1993
Posted April 7, 2009 — by admin
Category Literature
Category Literature
I want to be with you always
While I continue to live for you,
Your innocent eyes strike me
Like warm lightning from the sky.
The sea is now a landless scenery
But your wind is present and I am comforted,
Further much to go,
I want you by my side.
If the sky hides the sun
This darkness abhors the wind,
When every sight becomes near
Each sound I hear is deafening.
I am afloat this wooden raft my sweet child,
I want to sail but I move slowly
The water that carries me
Contains a huge fearful creature.
When the sky is in thick gray oil paint,
The sea is icy solid water.
How I want you near me;
I want to be with you always.
nicely worded bro, to whom are you referring in this literature, i wonder?
Comment by lary dela vega — April 8, 2009 @ 4:05 pm
To lary dela vega: I wrote this for my wife, when we were just fiances, in 1993. I poublished it back then in the college publication.
Comment by Major Tom — April 8, 2009 @ 4:11 pm
Nice poem MT ! Kaya naman pala nabihag si Misis
! Finally, I can comment...had problems commenting since last week pa !
Comment by haze — April 9, 2009 @ 3:02 am
To Hazel: Thanks Hazel, I wrote lots of poem back then, that was a peak I can say.
Yeah, I thought kinalimutan niyo na ako. Sira pala yung comments ko...Salamat kay Wil, he's the one who told me...
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Comment by Major Tom — April 10, 2009 @ 6:26 pm