The River Of Mesopotamia c. 2002

Written by Major Tom
Filed under: Literature
December 4, 2006

Note: This is a poem I’ve written some years ago. It’s about peace and unity among all men, of all faith and races.

In the ancient valleys of Tigris,

in the days of still molt and rock,

a river sung the serenade

of the beginnings of life,

as it moved in crystalline fluidity,

to brim with sparkles and light,

and come across upon a rock reckoned in time,

it is a moment set forth as a matter of design.

And the river became two,

the great parting of waters

in the dawning of the Earth,

to thread two different roads

and two different eras–

one found in the East,

another in the West–

to spread further and further,

until the sound they hear were

merely of their own

and nothing more.

Rushing in vigor and strength

each alone in the wilderness,

among the great wars of the world,

through the ashes of kingdoms burnt,

the mischief of kings and emperors,

through scorched earth of conquests,

of kingdoms and empires

both the fortunate and the inopportune;

as they run feverishly,

one oblivious to the other,

welcoming merely the beatings

of their own hearts

and of no other,

and every other beating of the heart they hear

was of the enemy and the enemy merely.

Amidst the rage of their marathon,

seemingly unending and without destination,

and with a ferocity so great that

even rocks of great prominence

would crumble into dust—

by the sheer strength of their pursuits,

or by the wave of their hands.

As another time was set forth,

where for once they looked heavenward

the journeys they threaded

finally found a single star,

to speak the truth in their own hearts

that in their own glorious runs,

no matter how magnificent and forceful,

still the Heavens are their own navigators,

upon the comets and constellations,

so that the rivers would find a path to travel,

a road set forth from the beginning of time

while they go nearer and nearer,

they begin to hear the same beat

that is not merely of their own separate hearts,

but of two hearts moving as one

running faster and faster,

like stallions in the hills of a desert

where in the beginning of time

there is only one river

that became two,

and then becoming one again.

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  1. Nice poem. It is the “marriage” of two rivers, isn’t it?

    I admire people who can compose poems, for I can never write one. You have a very wide vocabulary too.

    Comment by niceheart — December 11, 2006 @ 12:32 pm

  2. To niceheart: It must have looked that way, but I was really intending to mean that all men, of all races and creed, could become as one, just like the stream of rivers that can meet in a delta at some point. Thanx for the good note on my poem, I am sure you can also write one if you only concentrate on it.

    Comment by Major Tom — December 15, 2006 @ 2:25 pm

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